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Nhờ mọi người sửa giúp bài luận

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    in 140 words write a paragaph about benefits from the fact that many generations live in a home
    There are many benefits from the fact that many generation live in a home. first and foremost, that many generations live in a home will make members family understand thoroughly. They are very close-knit family and very supportive of one another. They can share their feelings or problems with other members in family in order to find solutions quickly. Besides, they also share household chores. Grandparents not only do housework such as: cleaning house, washing-up, doing the laundry but also look after grandchildrens when their parents go to work. Specially, the descendants also take care of their grandparents when they catch disease. Last but not least , many generations who live in a home is the best way to save a lot of money. The descendants don't waste time and money for traveling from place to place to visit their parents. In conclusion, the fact that many generations live in a home is a good chance so that members in family become close- knit



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    There are many benefits from the fact that many generations live in a home. Firstly, when many generations live in the same house, the family members will be able to understand one another more thoroughly. They can share their feelings or problems with others in family in order to find solutions quickly. Solving the difficulties together will make them love and be supportive of one another. Secondly, they can also share household chores.The grandparents can look after the small grandchildren when their parents go to work while the teenagers are doing housework such as cleaning house, washing-up, doing the laundry. If a child or an old person is sick, he or she will be taken good care of. Last but not least , many generations living in a home is one of the best ways to save a lot of money. The descendants don't have to waste time and money on traveling from place to place to visit their parents and grandparents. On the other hand, the old people will not feel lonely or miss their young relatives.
    In conclusion, that many generations live in a home is a good chance to make members in family become close- knit, supportive and responsible to one another.
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